The First Day
The school gates groaned as I pushed them open. Beyond them, the playground was a battlefield: pupils rushed in every direction, while bags banged and lockers clattered.
Silver streams of rain slid silently down the windows. Above the building, angry clouds gathered as my courage disappeared. My hands were as cold as ice. I could smell the sharp, damp scent of wet coats.
I wanted to turn back. I wanted to hide. I wanted to go home. Then I saw a frightened little boy, completely alone, looking for his classroom. How could I leave him there? Around us, the hall was noisy, yet his voice was barely a whisper. I held out my hand, and we went inside together.
Question
How does the writer use language to present the school as an intimidating place?
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